How did the writing process (brainstorming, drafting, revising, proofreading, and finalizing) shape the strength of the final essay, and what was learned about your personal strengths and areas for growth as a writer?

Prompt Response:  The writing process shaped the strength of the final essay because being able to plan extensively, from putting all of my ideas out in the cluster and carefully selecting quotes improved the quality of the essay. It also made it way easier to put everything together when writing the final version. Since I was able to get a large portion of my draft written ahead of time, all I had to do was add a little more commentary and polish everything. I've learned that my personal strengths in writing are developing claims and finding evidence that supports my argument, and my areas for growth are finding appropriate transition words and writing analysis of evidence.

Summary: Today we wrote out literary argument essay.

Reflection: I got better practice writing literary arguments.

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