Prompt: Reflect on your writing process for essays. Which part of writing an essay do you struggle with the most (for example: developing a thesis, organizing ideas, finding strong evidence, writing introductions, or explaining your analysis)? Which parts of essay writing do you feel most confident about? Explain why you feel strong in those areas and what specifically makes the challenging part difficult for you. Include at least one goal for how you plan to improve your essay writing skills.

Prompt Response: I think that when writing an essay I struggle the most with analyzing evidence.  I feel most confident about developing a thesis and writing introductions. I feel strongly in these areas because they are pretty straight to the point and simple. I find analysis of evidence to be challenging because I sometimes find it tricky to put my internal thoughts about the evidence into words. One goal for how I plan to improve my essay writing skills is by cutting out a lot of summarizing words and focusing more on specific language to analyze the quotes.

Summary: Today in class we went over how to write introduction and conclusion paragraphs and started writing the draft.

Reflection: I got better practice writing introduction paragraphs.

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