Why is drafting an essential step in the writing process rather than going straight to a final version? Use your own experience from this essay to explain how drafting improved (or revealed weaknesses in) your thinking.

Prompt Response: Drafting is an essential step in the writing process rather than going straight to a final version because evidence can seem effective, but once you try to explain it, you might struggle to actually put it into words. For example, when I was drafting my essay I realized that I wanted to switch one of my quotes because when I tried to explain I was repeating my analysis from my previous quote. Drafting also helps you to organize your ideas into the most effective order to prove your point.

Summary: Today in class we continued drafting our literary argument.

Reflection: I got practice constructing a literary argument.

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