Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Prompt Response: I was pretty happy with my first draft but the edits I made included improving transitions and polishing the format and language. I added more effective transitions to introduce quotes and explanations. I also think it helped to just reread my work with fresh eyes. When I was writing it in class, I quickly got very attached to the words I was using. However, when I looked at it again today the mistakes and unclear language jumped out at me and I was able to polish it so it makes more sense. I also fixed little grammar and punctuation mistakes.

Summary: Today in class we looked at the feedback on our body paragraph and revised it.

Reflection: I got practice revising and editing my writing.

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